Tuesday, August 24, 2010
What a Comment needs
A comment needs
- No swears words
- No spelling or grammar mistakes
- No slang words
- It has to make sense
- Cant write hurtful things
Monday, August 23, 2010
Wednesday, August 18, 2010
Beginning, Middle, End
Mr.Beans Holiday
Beginning: Mr. Bean won a free trip in a raffle to Cannes for a holiday and a free video camera.
Middle: He lost his luggage because he got out of the train to get his camera because a little kid stole it and when he got out the door, the door slammed and also got side tracked getting there.
End: He finally made it to his destination.
Johnny English
Beginning: Johnny English is a secret agent who is on a case to find the missing jewels
Middle: He gets fired because he accused a man who stole the missing jewels and found out the man who stole the jewels did steal it and forced the queen to assign him to become king but johnny didn't have the evidence.
End: He found evidence but he showed the wrong one but managed to force it out of him to confess and gets knighted and puts the bad man in jail.
Spider Plant Man
Beginning: Peter Piper was a photographer who took photos of plants
Middle: He got bitten by a plant called spider plant.
End: He realized he has superpowers so he uses it to defeat evil and keep the city safe.
Sunday, August 15, 2010
Thursday, August 12, 2010
Setting
Confidence gaining as each story he goes up. Adrenaline pumping as he reaches 1075 feet. Blue sky’s and white clouds, flying birds and noisy planes go by. The room is at the top of the sky tower and is clouded with bright light, foot steps and whispers in the air.
Tuesday, August 10, 2010
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)